Whenever I read a story and I get to the end, if the last sentence isn't powerful and makes you feel like you just got done reading something truly amazing, then the whole thing wasn't worth it. And I have to say, honey, you did a phenomenal job. The last lines to each segment are all quite simply perfect. Ties everything together and makes it flow so wonderfully. This story hurt so good. I loved every word of it.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2008-02-14 11:05 am (UTC)