SG1 writing exercise: Inside the Defenses

I was trying to write fic this week. It didn't work. Below I give you three snippets; I do not know whether they really come from the same fic or not, but I wanted them to. Judge for yourselves.

Inside the Defenses
J/D, PG-13, short.

( Jack didn't really quit smoking, as such )

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( Even amnesiac, Daniel still held all his secrets )

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( If I wrote the fic about Jack's history with addiction, this is how it would end )