You write Jack wonderfully. And David, so earnest and trusting... sigh~ this is beautiful. Everything is perfectly vivid:
It's so irrelevant, so I told you so in this moment of gravity, that Jack laughs and holds David tighter and spins them around a little, giddy with possibility.
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Date: 2009-03-18 09:26 pm (UTC)sigh~ this is beautiful. Everything is perfectly vivid:
It's so irrelevant, so I told you so in this moment of gravity, that Jack laughs and holds David tighter and spins them around a little, giddy with possibility.
SO GREAT.