This is really lovely. I really like the characterizations. They are truly Jack and Daniel. I also like the inclusion of Paul Davis - a character so full of potential and yet severely underused in both fanfic and the show. I would also like to thank you for having Paul show interest in Jack instead of Daniel. It is hard to find good stories these days that don't have Jack being "lucky" to have Daniel interested in him because he's an old warhorse. So, just thanks for this lovely story. I have saved it to my favorites.