ext_3529 ([identity profile] browngirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dragojustine 2008-07-24 11:21 pm (UTC)

I'm here from a rec to tell you I adore this. Your Jack-voice, the way they know each other so well and are such different people, the way all their voices are so perfect I can *hear* the dialogue. The dissection of the fight. And this:


Sam opened and closed her mouth once, at a loss without her usual line. Then she said brightly, “Guess you’ll stay and sleep it off, Daniel?”


Yay Sam! Because she's not dumb. :)

*applauds this story*

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